eyed you
wound jester
crackled blued
side Earth show
and afterbirth ...
tomb renewals
carved approvals
painted rates
caved futures
vinyl once-d
moments
hit upon
between
deep rabbit holed
bargaining
barter
wobbles ...
where poem soul goes
wandering offerings
finding things
mostly
loving shadows
coveting shiny ...
EJR ©
https://dversepoets.com/2016/08/01/i-am-who-i-am-but-tomorrow-who-knows/
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ReplyDeleteI really like the last verse...especially the "coveting shiny..." It made me think of crows who are sometimes attracted to shiny objects and will collect them.
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ReplyDeleteloving shadows
coveting shiny ..." nice and mysterious...
I'm impressed!
ReplyDeleteIt seems fitting, you like to go into dark shadowy places and shiny things show reflections of the self...pondering...dark/light are we not all part dark and light?
ReplyDeleteps - those rabbit holes can be tricky
Delete...where poem souls go....
ReplyDeleteUnique reply to my prompt. Thanks for joining us at dVerse - would love to have you stop by and reply to some of the other cameos folks have written -
Nice getting to know more of you. Love that poem soul searching for shiny and loving the shadows...
ReplyDeleteThe frenetic jump from one image to the next reads like a Picasso, and yet defines your vision of Edward!
ReplyDeleteI read, then re-read. Very nice!
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loving shadows
coveting shiny ..."
All literature echoes what has gone on before. Gollum? The visual layout of your blog helped bring me there, I guess... but loving shadows and coveting shiny.... Anyway... your poem is nicely laid out, and well drawn!
Oooh, well done. A good bit of darkness but then there's that crackled blue!
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