tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post8616830907512967399..comments2023-04-13T09:06:24.604-04:00Comments on the blind lantern: chameleon old school neophyte poet ............. ( a quadrille ? )Edwardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-83948483910509257772016-08-02T16:12:43.604-04:002016-08-02T16:12:43.604-04:00Oooh, well done. A good bit of darkness but then t...Oooh, well done. A good bit of darkness but then there's that crackled blue!Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-18352295348310567162016-08-02T14:02:22.623-04:002016-08-02T14:02:22.623-04:00"finding things
mostly
loving shadows
cove..."finding things <br />mostly <br />loving shadows <br />coveting shiny ..."<br /><br />All literature echoes what has gone on before. Gollum? The visual layout of your blog helped bring me there, I guess... but loving shadows and coveting shiny.... Anyway... your poem is nicely laid out, and well drawn! Charleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08662221501459533188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-40613140625332858942016-08-02T09:43:26.704-04:002016-08-02T09:43:26.704-04:00I read, then re-read. Very nice!I read, then re-read. Very nice!Janet Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10126248666972072628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-59572023055170734952016-08-02T08:51:58.940-04:002016-08-02T08:51:58.940-04:00The frenetic jump from one image to the next reads...The frenetic jump from one image to the next reads like a Picasso, and yet defines your vision of Edward!Walt Wojtanikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02649275109990415030noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-65687799551554952412016-08-02T08:18:49.485-04:002016-08-02T08:18:49.485-04:00Nice getting to know more of you. Love that poem...Nice getting to know more of you. Love that poem soul searching for shiny and loving the shadows...Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-13819145595120000472016-08-02T07:42:20.571-04:002016-08-02T07:42:20.571-04:00...where poem souls go....
Unique reply to my prom......where poem souls go....<br />Unique reply to my prompt. Thanks for joining us at dVerse - would love to have you stop by and reply to some of the other cameos folks have written - lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12664830773553716989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-3383479403465478202016-08-02T06:40:43.039-04:002016-08-02T06:40:43.039-04:00ps - those rabbit holes can be trickyps - those rabbit holes can be trickyTruedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-76718378367826198812016-08-02T06:40:22.021-04:002016-08-02T06:40:22.021-04:00It seems fitting, you like to go into dark shadowy...It seems fitting, you like to go into dark shadowy places and shiny things show reflections of the self...pondering...dark/light are we not all part dark and light?Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-73502769310418882032016-08-02T06:11:47.616-04:002016-08-02T06:11:47.616-04:00I'm impressed!I'm impressed!Petru J Viljoenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04821468855056711841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-6942125390784637492016-08-02T02:52:47.178-04:002016-08-02T02:52:47.178-04:00"mostly
loving shadows
coveting shiny ...&q... "mostly <br />loving shadows <br />coveting shiny ..." nice and mysterious...<br /><br />Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-46624699392676134192016-08-01T23:26:52.868-04:002016-08-01T23:26:52.868-04:00I really like the last verse...especially the &quo...I really like the last verse...especially the "coveting shiny..." It made me think of crows who are sometimes attracted to shiny objects and will collect them.Gayle Walters Rosenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-29389389590688616032016-08-01T23:15:23.071-04:002016-08-01T23:15:23.071-04:00This comment has been removed by the author.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-16598302188669941562016-08-01T22:17:39.913-04:002016-08-01T22:17:39.913-04:00https://dversepoets.com/2016/08/01/i-am-who-i-am-b...https://dversepoets.com/2016/08/01/i-am-who-i-am-but-tomorrow-who-knows/<br />Edwardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.com