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my midsummer faith twists and cricks
I'm every crooked stick
gone a leaping fires quickly
while taking out my dick
dawn is thirsty snakes
I hear crowds begin
murmur round completions
nimble feet skim
belled waxy piss
on my pants
scapegoat
purified
another secretion
EJR ©
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ReplyDeleteDawn is thirsty snakes... there are those moments when we dread the light
ReplyDeleteQuite frightening.
ReplyDeleteI really like the opening lines and this: dawn is thirsty snakes ~
ReplyDeleteI really like the opening lines.
ReplyDeletea passionate write...
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure whether this is meant satirically or not. If not, people showing off can be a piss. If not ... some release or the other clearly necessary as long as the daylight shining on it can be staved off. I'm impressed!
ReplyDeleteIs this what guys do around bonfires...I don't think I'll ever understand men!
ReplyDeletesounds like a night gone wild...putting out a fire, starting a fire not sure which...
ReplyDeleteIn a word, excitement.
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