tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post9216942421973197700..comments2023-04-13T09:06:24.604-04:00Comments on the blind lantern: poem 152 of a poem a day for 2012Edwardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-39089443876109780772012-05-09T00:20:13.353-04:002012-05-09T00:20:13.353-04:00just a simple, sometimes clever, poet trying to f...just a simple, sometimes clever, poet trying to find his way in this wide world of discovering another thing to love today...really appreciate that you stopped by and am grateful for your comment...EdwardEdwardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-73457406750467056302012-05-08T23:33:46.357-04:002012-05-08T23:33:46.357-04:00This is fantastic, Edward! I believe this is my fi...This is fantastic, Edward! I believe this is my first time visiting your blog. The way you envision and describe each morsel of touch is so original and inviting. Lovely!<br /><br />These are some of my favorite parts:<br /><br />"each sacred sweet sharp <br />vines me"<br /><br />"wears my limbs as an amulet"<br /><br />"suckling tender ferocities"<br /><br />"a soul’s tendril crawl"<br /><br />"I take small bites<br />paint the moonlight"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-44141357832442931772012-05-08T22:06:07.670-04:002012-05-08T22:06:07.670-04:00Loved your piece...and am grateful for you stoppin...Loved your piece...and am grateful for you stopping by to say hello...Edwardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-67142356932353982792012-05-08T21:55:58.318-04:002012-05-08T21:55:58.318-04:00Of course, I like this very much....sensuality ble...Of course, I like this very much....sensuality blending with nature is perfect..Nice to meet you at D'verse ~<br /><br />http://a-sweetlust.blogspot.ca/2012/05/moon.htmlScarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-43388224156929161622012-05-08T21:31:18.275-04:002012-05-08T21:31:18.275-04:00Sometimes, with me, the poem just unfurls like a l...Sometimes, with me, the poem just unfurls like a lonely thirst opening my heart's spigot...thank you for visiting... :)Edwardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-33446027955879046922012-05-08T20:04:34.137-04:002012-05-08T20:04:34.137-04:00Sultry, sensual and passionate - the language curl...Sultry, sensual and passionate - the language curls like vines, the images flower.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-39135308954194665492012-05-08T19:23:59.194-04:002012-05-08T19:23:59.194-04:00...I find the salt sculptures that our desires,wav......I find the salt sculptures that our desires,wave splash the unseen with, show more in our built silhouettes than the fully lit naked absence of mystery, that erotica can sometimes represent...gratitude for the taking the time to comment... :)Edwardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-27248793409584087222012-05-08T19:15:44.685-04:002012-05-08T19:15:44.685-04:00Thank you for seeing that...really appreciate your...Thank you for seeing that...really appreciate your perspective...opens the arms of my Earth a little wider for the Sun to get inside...Edwardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-39478443699836418212012-05-08T19:04:40.530-04:002012-05-08T19:04:40.530-04:00Sighing contentedly here. I have said many times m...Sighing contentedly here. I have said many times many places that I dislike erotica on general principles as it's very dull most times, but this is a luminous, emotive, tender, and deeply satisfying piece of love poetry and should be read simply as pure poetry. Excellent work and I greatly enjoyed it.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-496800785303580062012-05-08T18:31:58.052-04:002012-05-08T18:31:58.052-04:00Beautiful and intimate in more than the obvious wa...Beautiful and intimate in more than the obvious ways. This is truth via poetry, confession, the desire to want, to need, to cling. To be one with another beyond the physical...that place that we all somehow remember..yet claim to have seldom been.Tashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-4593384645620044782012-05-08T18:06:54.510-04:002012-05-08T18:06:54.510-04:00Thank you...I love the sweet linger that just bein...Thank you...I love the sweet linger that just being in a moment can bring...Edwardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-39351905832671632972012-05-08T18:01:55.606-04:002012-05-08T18:01:55.606-04:00I love a little infinity.
Very sweet.I love a little infinity.<br />Very sweet.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-37260335347033257252012-05-08T17:37:22.402-04:002012-05-08T17:37:22.402-04:00sometimes it pays to listen in silence at the rain...sometimes it pays to listen in silence at the rain just outside the window ,while musing the dream-filled joys of an intimate companion...thank you : ^ )Edwardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-39646534294020844982012-05-08T17:20:16.029-04:002012-05-08T17:20:16.029-04:00Great write...sensual..love this...I love when you...Great write...sensual..love this...I love when you steal my words<br />leave my mind a breathless pause :)ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-39141039024797150042012-05-08T16:20:14.496-04:002012-05-08T16:20:14.496-04:00May is a divine month for intimacy...thank you for...May is a divine month for intimacy...thank you for your comments...as for word pairings...I like to mine the verbals ores for entendre-esque smiles that can be found in the common places of where we race to slow build the joys of laughing out loud,leaning out an open window at the rain or Sun or what comes between the song we hear that calls the poem and how we always tend to write from where our heart is home...Edwardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-67101041402235740632012-05-08T15:46:47.748-04:002012-05-08T15:46:47.748-04:00dang...hot piece...love the intimacy....what i fin...dang...hot piece...love the intimacy....what i find very fun is your word pairings...<br /><br />tender ferocities<br />little infinities<br />ancestral calculus<br /><br />all cool...really nice poem....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com