tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post862518529436275242..comments2023-04-13T09:06:24.604-04:00Comments on the blind lantern: she was emerging from a lake inn (an octain)Edwardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-8890845791999903812016-04-11T18:17:15.513-04:002016-04-11T18:17:15.513-04:00SMiLes.. a naturAlly
more visual person
than verba...SMiLes.. a naturAlly<br />more visual person<br />than verbal person..<br />i am smitten by the<br />statues of the male<br />and female forms you<br />provide.. and pleasant<br />to say.. the best way i appreciate<br />the softer version of the human genders<br />is in a soft to hard dance.. of being<br />hUman<br />iN flesh and<br />blood.. 11 million<br />words.. i would trade<br />for just one dance<br />step i own<br />now with<br />fairer <br />smiles<br />of THAT<br />gender now..:)Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-34003086331247091992016-03-26T23:54:20.132-04:002016-03-26T23:54:20.132-04:00Alluring and mysterious. Alluring and mysterious. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-14428182506424665582016-03-26T01:30:29.851-04:002016-03-26T01:30:29.851-04:00Oh, man. I LOVE the idea of poems being "a he...Oh, man. I LOVE the idea of poems being "a held vest tight." Just too awesome. De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-21965396207114320322016-03-25T19:22:54.693-04:002016-03-25T19:22:54.693-04:00I flipping love that opening line.
She keeps her ...I flipping love that opening line.<br /><br />She keeps her poems against, or inside, her chest because anytime you write something, you give it power. She is careful not to write anything that may contribute to her own mental and/or emotional demise.<br /><br />I hear, "She was emerging from lichen/liken/like-kin." <br /><br />Mad Love for the ending couplet.Caseynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-5965696602257321322016-03-25T16:09:20.144-04:002016-03-25T16:09:20.144-04:00Nicely done, Edward! Nicely done, Edward! Walter J. Wojtanikhttp://wojisme.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-51992820661524266312016-03-24T23:15:30.382-04:002016-03-24T23:15:30.382-04:00Wonderfully atmospheric tone!Wonderfully atmospheric tone!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-7248607774949729242016-03-24T22:17:33.906-04:002016-03-24T22:17:33.906-04:00I am somewhat of a free-form-ist but for me, this ...I am somewhat of a free-form-ist but for me, this prompt was beyond ticklishly fun...gratitude for saying such.Edwardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-78626136732478384102016-03-24T22:15:09.767-04:002016-03-24T22:15:09.767-04:00Thank You...I like that line too...sort of wrote i...Thank You...I like that line too...sort of wrote itself as I almost sang-spoke it while typing...<br /><br />a mantra for rogue position...<br />fingers are slow, <br />brain is faster, <br />sing to last here <br />chanting her composition...<br /><br />Edwardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-17971066249563903932016-03-24T22:09:29.780-04:002016-03-24T22:09:29.780-04:00Aren't they all... :)Aren't they all... :)Edwardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-68525219960325801192016-03-24T22:09:02.622-04:002016-03-24T22:09:02.622-04:00It did feel much like dressing up...very fun indee...It did feel much like dressing up...very fun indeed...Edwardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-87667446233911623472016-03-24T22:03:45.663-04:002016-03-24T22:03:45.663-04:00Imaginative ...the form used to perfection!Imaginative ...the form used to perfection!Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-58503375142639969132016-03-24T20:56:28.452-04:002016-03-24T20:56:28.452-04:00"standing staring, dared forsaken", it s..."standing staring, dared forsaken", it speaks volumes without lots of wordiness. Very inspiring Waltermarkshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619428258264938946noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-87587521131881381992016-03-24T19:52:08.039-04:002016-03-24T19:52:08.039-04:00Well, Thank You very much...the prompt became this...Well, Thank You very much...the prompt became this joyful little dance in the middle of the road, I had to play a bit, along my journey as well...Edwardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-70110849810259973452016-03-24T19:12:44.235-04:002016-03-24T19:12:44.235-04:00I like that your nymph was a poetess and really en...I like that your nymph was a poetess and really enjoyed your fifth line rhyming too.Bodhirosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12630769135515322096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-20969025673083851332016-03-24T18:47:59.135-04:002016-03-24T18:47:59.135-04:00This shows how adaptable the form is, giving your ...This shows how adaptable the form is, giving your poem such a classical feel. Beautiful.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-75389596376261383492016-03-24T18:05:55.530-04:002016-03-24T18:05:55.530-04:00Well, Thank You very much...the prompt became this...Well, Thank You very much...the prompt became this joyful little dance in the middle of the road, I had to play a bit, along my journey as well...Edwardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-48743905884778634552016-03-24T18:03:45.439-04:002016-03-24T18:03:45.439-04:00Gratitude...Gratitude...Edwardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-72583466534533602232016-03-24T18:02:29.073-04:002016-03-24T18:02:29.073-04:00: ^ ): ^ )Edwardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-40252926909353413212016-03-24T17:58:10.650-04:002016-03-24T17:58:10.650-04:00Thank You, I stretched it a bit and after playing ...Thank You, I stretched it a bit and after playing around with the aural tones, I then found "lake in" charming, she was already disarming... Edwardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-53143402569203995032016-03-24T17:54:22.116-04:002016-03-24T17:54:22.116-04:00Yes, it was lots of fun... Yes, it was lots of fun... Edwardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-87996668083388203282016-03-24T17:45:07.891-04:002016-03-24T17:45:07.891-04:00You had me from the first opening line ~
I didn...You had me from the first opening line ~ <br /><br />I didn't know that you take to poetry form, but you do effortlessly too ~<br /><br />Good to see you so enthusiastic at our prompts ~<br /><br />Happy Easter ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-28573333562788525952016-03-24T17:36:00.628-04:002016-03-24T17:36:00.628-04:00Wow...loved the form in your hands! Well done. Thi...Wow...loved the form in your hands! Well done. This is fun, isn't it? Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-52153785157310209532016-03-24T17:02:21.471-04:002016-03-24T17:02:21.471-04:00This is brilliant!! Love this :DThis is brilliant!! Love this :DSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-56273164126595603552016-03-24T16:53:36.047-04:002016-03-24T16:53:36.047-04:00A very sensual piece. You used the form well!A very sensual piece. You used the form well!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05126230685516232230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-12315747020955375752016-03-24T16:51:46.790-04:002016-03-24T16:51:46.790-04:00Very creative rhyme scheme.Very creative rhyme scheme.AnotherFearlessYear.nethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11189052349065089513noreply@blogger.com