tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post7295043861741554324..comments2023-04-13T09:06:24.604-04:00Comments on the blind lantern: sneaking sauce in a hip flask...Edwardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-64049449515158362802016-03-01T21:26:51.365-05:002016-03-01T21:26:51.365-05:00and sometimes I don't know what holiday it is ...and sometimes I don't know what holiday it is supposed to be...Edwardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-76375552415553504682016-03-01T21:26:06.366-05:002016-03-01T21:26:06.366-05:00Even there, ever could mean always, or it could im...Even there, ever could mean always, or it could imply that you can't believe you ever did. Poetry should absolutely be baffling and contra-dictory, which is why what you do is magic.<br /><br />Thank you, for every little nugget or phat bone you throw at me to gnaw on.<br /><br />You are the coolest, poet.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-6677006354335927592016-03-01T21:13:31.317-05:002016-03-01T21:13:31.317-05:00so I wrote
hat on cot tin
roof and the sin
of ...so I wrote <br /><br />hat on cot tin <br />roof and the sin <br />of ever loving rain Edwardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-52144006153574444722016-03-01T20:41:48.402-05:002016-03-01T20:41:48.402-05:00So much said in the tense switching. Tense switchi...So much said in the tense switching. Tense switching. Sense twitching. Incense witching, kindled wishes for more scores of cored-dandelion fluff.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-76686121260135388602016-03-01T09:47:31.037-05:002016-03-01T09:47:31.037-05:00just us burning down the mission...just us burning down the mission...Edwardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-84914848492868806242016-03-01T09:39:24.098-05:002016-03-01T09:39:24.098-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-79768093256823188692016-03-01T09:35:15.207-05:002016-03-01T09:35:15.207-05:00Now that, I can understand completely.Now that, I can understand completely.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-79072329740726807652016-03-01T08:57:44.200-05:002016-03-01T08:57:44.200-05:00west of eden nodding in the doorway with hourglass...west of eden nodding in the doorway with hourglass cinch waist and the legs of a table I'm able this first day of meteorological spring to take my belly button lint and make eggs with it...I must be ovulating...or a mad hatter to be...Edwardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-4527889262661456622016-03-01T08:08:37.936-05:002016-03-01T08:08:37.936-05:00Every line break carries additional meaning, like ...Every line break carries additional meaning, like the "lean" lines that also talk about starvation.<br /><br />"a now"s disappear so quickly as moments are blurred and unclarified, which an unabstract poem has the power to do to an abstract brain drinking coconut juice during hospital visiting hours --- which always end too soon, or not soon enough, depending on how scared you are of hospitals.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-47414357385950692362016-02-29T23:49:02.442-05:002016-02-29T23:49:02.442-05:00Sometimes poem says you have to go less abstract t...Sometimes poem says you have to go less abstract to distill potent contact in the right time lapsed synapse language...Edwardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-20415463638362733332016-02-29T23:39:25.090-05:002016-02-29T23:39:25.090-05:00Lovely, poet ♥Lovely, poet ♥Diana Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11333180217795290780noreply@blogger.com