tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post3879505833541942360..comments2023-04-13T09:06:24.604-04:00Comments on the blind lantern: poem 289 of a poem a day for 2012Edwardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-461978803407218312012-08-30T20:59:09.487-04:002012-08-30T20:59:09.487-04:00great lines.... being someone’s baby in the rain
t...great lines.... being someone’s baby in the rain<br />turns the asphalt to flags<br />like my legs after sex<br />buckling with needs<br />bleeding water near<br />the slow oxidation of rust<br />past the scream of oxygen ..........great journey.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-81672800954922799532012-08-28T17:21:59.327-04:002012-08-28T17:21:59.327-04:00A kaleidoscope of image upon shattered image that ...A kaleidoscope of image upon shattered image that drives a sense of disoriented alienation, yet also a deeper well of feeling, strong enough to buckle asphalt and legs. Gifted writing here.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-51774933407536759842012-08-28T17:13:43.109-04:002012-08-28T17:13:43.109-04:00wow...this is a wonderful journey...and where you ...wow...this is a wonderful journey...and where you end up is strong...love that no road can be a womb....your first bit comparing to your legs after sex as well....wow....very cool....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6919416546828451538.post-7568719704479298182012-08-28T16:17:38.191-04:002012-08-28T16:17:38.191-04:00nice..you take us from image to the next..i like t...nice..you take us from image to the next..i like the nod to the pied piper as well..the old soul singing children's song...wet-clay your world again...and then with the closure you take us to the start..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.com